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“CHILDREN
OF THE FORGOTTEN ISLAND” CONCEPT and STORY by: ADRIAN COETZER AND DEESHAN MOODLEY STORYBOARD BY: ADRIAN COETZER |
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Thando lies stabbed in an alley (he is 18years old) Present Day CHILDREN OF THE FORGOTTEN ISLAND scroll sideways -----------------> click here for synopsis | budget | motivation |
camera pulls back |
cut to Thando looking at the sky and
a figure of a warrior appears CHILDREN OF THE FORGOTTEN ISLAND |
fade to black |
An african baby (Thando) crawls along
a path in a forest with lots of leaves and light rays cutting thru the
trees. Flash back to when Thando was a baby. CHILDREN OF THE FORGOTTEN ISLAND |
as he crawls he grows and starts to
walk, stumbles then continues to walk along the path |
with rapid CGI growth he is now about
5 years old and running along the path (alot like the evolution of humankind).
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We are now following him from behind
CHILDREN OF THE FORGOTTEN ISLAND |
Thando hears a noise behind him, he stops,
turns and glances over the terrain for a second (he know that there is something following him) |
LONG SHOT. We view Thando from behind
a shrub as if it’s the view of someone watching him, THANDO recognizes something (while looking into the camera) |
he runs away –camera follows from
watching position (pushes thru the shrubs)… camera gains on him |
as he is about to be caught he pushes
thru the bushes CHILDREN OF THE FORGOTTEN ISLAND |
steps through into a clearing |
A car stops in a busy street, cars are
rushing by, Thando is stunned, he is wearing an old shorts, tshirt. |
car passes and driver shouts at him |
Mama (grandmother) comes running in hysterics |
camera pulls back to show that they are
in a big city CHILDREN OF THE FORGOTTEN ISLAND |
Mama has a word with Thando |
even though she is old she finds the
strenght to walk him back to safety |
Mama reminds Thando that he's in alot
of trouble for playing in the street |
Thundo looks into the bushes CHILDREN OF THE FORGOTTEN ISLAND |
something looks back at him... in the beginning Thando plays hide and seek with the 'shadow'/warrior as he is young and has less fear but as he grows we see that he becomes more afraid - as we all do |
cut
to title | approx. 117min __________________________________________________________________________________________________ |
Thando and Mama jump into a twelve seater
taxi, however the taxi is over the passenger limit, there is a song blaring
on the background. |
Due to space constraints
Thando needs to cramp himself against a fat lady. The fat lady is dressed
in old worn out clothing, she is eating a fried mealie (corn cob) - eating
it slowly. |
Thando and Mama are walking in sand tracks
in an open field, the field has big trees. Mama is walking with difficulty.
Thando is walking next to Mama jumping up and down and swaying his arms
in the air. CHILDREN OF THE FORGOTTEN ISLAND |
Thando and Mama walk to Solomon, thin
old man with a scruffy beard. He is sitting behind a counter of an old
shack. There is a sign hanging above the shack. SOLOMONS GENERAL DEALER,
written in hand script. The shack looks old and worn out there are cans
and bread on display. Thando streches to see over counter. |
Exterior of shack |
Thando and girl fetching water |
Thando washing hands and face before
dinner CHILDREN OF THE FORGOTTEN ISLAND |
Mama gives Thando some of her food |
Thando and Mama talk about his father |
Thando sleeps |
Thando dream sequence CHILDREN OF THE FORGOTTEN ISLAND |
Dream Sequence - warrior |
Thando dream sequence Thando dreams of his father leaving him - this is followed thru by Thando also running away from issues rather than staying and dealing with them |
Thando wakes up from dream sequence |
Mama wakes Thando up and they talk about bad dreams |
Mama gives Thando some money to by food |
Thando buys bread and sees a boy in an
alley on his way back |
The boy is suffering and hungry |
Thando gives Simphiwe the bread CHILDREN OF THE FORGOTTEN ISLAND |
Thando calls out for help but no one
hears him |
Simphiwe eats the food and Thando tells
him that his grandmother will help |
Mama askes where the bread is and Thando
tells her that he gave it to Simphiwe because he needed it more than them note: advertising spot available on lamp post to fund production |
Thando begs for some money CHILDREN OF THE FORGOTTEN ISLAND |
a kind lady gives Thando some change |
Thando buys some more bread and gives
it to Mama |
Thando is playing with his sword and
fighting his dragon |
a shadow of the warrior appears as a
shadow in the corner of the room CHILDREN OF THE FORGOTTEN ISLAND |
Thando is scared and calls out to Mama |
Mama speaks to him about his ancestors
and that he must respect them |